Dream Paradise Story Contest
14 years, 7 months & 16 days ago
18th Sep 2009 09:36 Post your stories here!
First story by Tweety
I woke up at the break of dawn. Sunlight peeked through my closed curtains. I reluctantly rose from my warm bed to open them. I stared in shock at the white wonderland outside. There was SNOW everywhere! Winter had finally arrived. The last few LEAVES must have fallen last night.
I scrambled to get my coat and scarf before dashing for the door. I could see APPLE and cinnamon muffins as I ran though the kitchen. My sister must be still asleep, because she hasn't eaten them yet. I also saw a MICROWAVED POPCORN packet. I decided to have that later. Who turns down a bowl of popcorn? Not me.
I raced through the living room and reach the front door. With a bang the door shut behing me and I was ready to enjoy a day in the snow.
Who doesn't like a happy ending. Hope you like this one.
Tayla's Story from the autumn party
The clouds covered the darkening sky, the leaves rustled and the wind blew harshly. It was the night, the night that.......
it happened. The wind was still harsh. The leaves were still rustling. But then it happened. Then i heard the scream. The scream of one helpless little girl. I rushed over and saw a men with a gun to her head. I ran until.............
he pointed the gun to me and shot it. I was helpless. I was lying on the road blood rushing from my tummy and i died. Never seen my daughter give birth to her gorgus twins Ellie and Tom!......
TO BE CONTINUED!
Story By Hunt
here is a story about a spounge.there was once a spoung named spongebob.spoungebob likes karte,sufing the waves of the blue loogon,and playing with patrick.one day on patricks birthday spoungebob wanted to make a present for patrick.he raced to the store but he was to late.the store was closed.he had to get patrick a present. so he loked around hi house.he had apples cinnamin pie crust and patricks belly lint.he couldnt figure out eneything to do with the belly lint .so he decided to make an apple pie .he took out his great grandmas recipe for apple pie.it reqiered 2 pounds of cinnemon ,15 apples,and a pie crust.he prepared the pie and gave it to patrick.it dint smell good but patrick liked it . the end
Story By Tayla
In the deep sea was a half eaten apple. It was just sitting there, moving slowly with the current. The kids would see it and scream because they would think it was a jelly fish, but they don???t know what this apple has been through. It has been sitting in the ocean for 3 years. But before it got there it was grown on a tree. Then picked and got put in the shop. Then one day a child that loved karate came along and brought the apple and took it home. He also brought a sponge and a hammock but who knows why.
Then he went to the beach and polished the apple wrapped it in the tiny hammock, took one little bite and karate kicked it into the water and eventually a men came and fished it out and through it in the bin and the apple rotted away.
Scotty's Huge Party Story
It was a content day in peaceville but why was it so quiet?
It all started on a warm sunny wdnesday afternoon.Hammy and puppy were playing in the ice cold sprinkler water.SUDDENLY, THE WATER TURNED TO SLIME. soon the whole of oeacevilles water had turned to slime.Hammy and puppy ran to see what all the commotion was about, but just as they got to the town quare they saw a big, slimy wrinkly snake crawl out of the sewer."AHHHHHHHHHH", THEY SCREAMED.soon they had told everyone in the village and there was a meeting later that day. 17:00 in the afternoon and they finally came to an agreement.Everyone would run home lock there doors and never come out again unbtill something had been done.That was 500 years ago and they are still hiding now!I wonder if they know the snake died 300 years ago, oh well lets just leave them there.
Hunt's story
it was a quite day becaus everybody went over to the hog fest in noisyville.the band was strumming the noise was tramendois.it smell like bacon at hog fest because well da it was hog fest.but the perfect party was about to go down hill.the party went silent when big gymey came he took the stage that the band played on and throw it to peaceville!then he throw the rest of the stuff to peaceville!someone had to stop him!then the killer frenchbull dog came but this time not to kill stuff.instead he started punching and kicking gymey.he holded him in a choke and asked wat he wanted from the people at hog fest.he said it was to quite at peaceville so he decided to try to get the party to move bit i just caused alot of comotion.well the french bulldog said you could just ask the party to move to peaceville.i guess.so he asked the people at the paty if it could move and they agreed.that day peaceville finely had some noise.
Tweety's Story
Ok I'm going to write a story which includes the words mini, panda, cake, boom, balloon and wow!
My stomach was unsettled as I led the way outside. My friends were chattering excitedly behind me. I opened the back door and was blown away by what I saw. There were balloons everywhere. A pinata in the shape of a PANDA hung from a nearby tree. The center piece was the huge CAKE on the table. WOW! I was stunned.
My family was waiting behind the cake and started to sing "Happy Birthday To You". A large grin slowly appeared on my face. This was going to be fun!
A blue BALLOON which hadn't been tied up properly blew across the lawn and touched a spicky rose bush. With a loud BOOM, it popped. I sat down in front of the cake near a MINI box of chocolates wrapped in a bow. Someone was a cheapskate. I leaned forward and blew out the candles...
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