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shakira202
This is a poem i wrote DON'T STEAL IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Apart




As I lay here in cold
My future untold
Never to see the light
Or whatever else is bright
I wish you were within my reach
Then we would lay together forever on the beach
As I lay here in cold
My future untold
With love in my heart
I will never fall apart
shakira2020
shakira20210 Jul 200836comments
Comments (36)
  • shakira202 0 shakira202Thank you.
  • Draviance 0 DravianceThe mood in these poems are so lovely! It entrances me and leaves me in this state of love. It's so calm and soothing!
  • shakira202 0 shakira202Thank you.I'm a very deep person.
  • gigglemagic 0 gigglemagicthis is my favorite
  • shakira202 0 shakira202This one was very deep.
  • Prisca 21 PriscaWow, that is really good!
  • shakira202 0 shakira202Thank you.
  • Hobbit03 0 Hobbit03Pretty good, but some of your word choice seems a little rushed and sophomoric.
  • shakira202 0 shakira202Thanks for commenting.
  • 0 HiddenVampireyou are really good at writeing poems
  • shakira202 0 shakira202Thank you!I thought about being an author.
  • mistressmissyaa 0 mistressmissyaaI love it!
  • shakira202 0 shakira202Thank you!
  • hounddog2007 0 hounddog2007Nice job...
  • shakira202 0 shakira202Thank you very much!
  • Loveyou4ever321 0 Loveyou4ever321gl being one! Awsome & gr8 poem........Its small but so informative,totally fabulous!
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