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iwish2bloved
evertime you look at me i feel like crawling up a tree but when you look and smile at me everything changes its not how it use to be now you really changed, I smiled at you brightly and you smiled at me it was amaricle to see...that you are happy' Because thats how....we use to be. Cause you were there for me when i staned by a tree you suddenly stared at me so brightly, it was at school a friday weekend by your side i was there, looking at you...My dear.


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rate my song 1-100 happy.gif happy.gif happy.gif
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iwish2bloved11 Sep 200813comments
Comments (13)
  • smiles016 0 smiles01640.Sorry,It's too short and has to rythym
  • 0 iwish2blovedokay i was still writeing but okay
  • 0 smile81very nice 70 out of a 100. a few spelling mistakes like crwling and aand. Needs to be longer to be a song
  • 0 iwish2blovedShut Up,Fatty.Kasey,It is GOOD but it needs more. ----------------------------- yes maaam
  • 0 iwish2blovedoh no my blog dissapeared!! let me writemore...
  • kfisher099 0 kfisher099luv it ❤️
  • 0 iwish2blovedsooooooo it that a 95 or 10000???
  • 0 iwish2blovedlol
  • 0 iwish2blovedi pick 1,000000000
  • 0 iwish2blovedlolllll
  • 0 iwish2blovedi ??? song
  • iwish2beloved 0 iwish2belovedMe to
  • boyslikegirlz 0 boyslikegirlzThis is amazing.
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