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Awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!&#
16 years, 2 months & 22 days ago
21st May 2009 14:32
please post on here what i should call this story
i hope you like it
Once there was a boy named Brian. He just couldn???t wait; tomorrow his family was going on vacation. They were going to Utah. At night he got such little sleep that when everyone was ready to leave and in their car he realized he forgot his bag of stuff to do. So he hopped out of the car and ran inside to get it. His dad not realizing Brian was not in the car got out and locked all the doors so no one could get in. When Brian???s dad got back in the car they drove away immediately leaving Brian locked inside. Brian searched for a way out, but there was none. Then he remembered he had a key in his room. His room was so disgustingly messy he couldn???t find it. He decided to clean it. It took him a whole five hours to clean it. Yet he still couldn???t find the key. So he decided he would search through his drawers and everything. He still couldn???t find it. Then it hit him. No not an idea, but the key literally hit him. The key was floating in midair, he didn???t believe it; no it couldn???t have been possible. But it was.
Chapter 2
Brian didn???t know it but his mom and dad purposely left him behind to find out himself about a mystery that he was supposed to solve. Brian stared at the key but he never believed it was actually floating. Then he thought he heard a voice but there was no one around. The voice was the key, it was talking. Brian turned toward it and listened. What he heard he could not believe. It said he and one other person will go on a mission to save the city. There was a poem that foretold what he had to do. The key reached out an arm and handed to him an ancient scroll. He read it millions of times it said,
Go outdoors and you will see
What looks like but is not a bee
The bee will turn human there
And you will see locks of golden hair
You will go on a mission to save the city
For the mission will give you no pity
When you cross the road you will find the woods
But not if you look no farther than your hoods
Walk away
And you???ll freeze for a day
Walk straight in
And you???re going for the win
The path knows what way to go
Just follow it for five days or so
When you???re done you know what to do
But no one knows if you???ll save us from glue
The glue is mysterious, sticky, and hot
You???ll find yourself stuck to one spot
Without your help we will never move
So here and now Brian must get the groove
The key said ???Get some sleep, then you must go.??? So Brian quietly went to bed and quickly fell asleep.
Chapter 3
When Brian woke up he was worried. He had dreaded this day. So he went back to sleep but then he couldn???t seem to fall asleep. His mind was rushing, so he got up and jumped back startled. The key was right there in front of him. He had no idea how it got there so fast, but then it spoke, it told him he was sorry for startling him but he has something very important he must tell him. ???What is it???? asked Brian. He was eager to know what the key had to tell him. ???You must not ask many questions, for I may answer only one a day.??? The key said ???So I must not tell you what I was really going to say but I will tell you that, what I have just told you is partially it.??? ???Now you must go outside.??? So Brian swiftly ran out the door, not wanting any more surprises. But the sitting right in front of him there was a bee as small as any other bee there is. Brian remembered from the scroll that when he goes outside he???ll see a bee, and the bee will turn to human. But for some reason the bee would not change. Brian decided there was some type of secret word he must say so he tried to figure it out. He thought of a whole bunch of girl names he tried each one. Eliza, Lily, Rose, he kept saying names but then on one of the names the bee sprung up and turned human. It was like a miracle, there was a bee then all of the sudden there was a white light and then a human appeared. Her name was Luna. She had beautiful golden blond hair, and she had the most precious smile.
Chapter 4
Luna told Brian that they must go now and the key shall come with. She also told him the key had a name, his name was Jordan. To Brian it felt weird calling a key by a name but he did anyway. So with that they walked off toward the road. They watched for cars and crossed. When they got to the other side Brian couldn???t find the woods. The scroll had specifically said there was going to be a woods there; but there wasn???t. Then he remembered there was more and it said not if we look no farther that your hoods. Well they didn???t have hoods on so did that really matter. So he asked Luna. ???It really meant it when it said look no farther than your hoods.??? she said ???Look right down there it may be tiny but it is there.??? So Brian look at where she had pointed, and he saw it. It was a woods the size of a pencil tip. He couldn???t believe his eyes, but he figured it was actually that small because of everything else that is weird that he experienced. Neither Brian, Luna, or Jordan knew what to do. Then Brian got an idea. The scroll said the path knows which way to go. Then he blurted out ???There???s a path!??? ???Let???s follow it!??? Everyone agreed so they moved forward, and there right in front of them was a big huge monster. Although Brian was afraid, Luna wasn???t at all. It seemed like she knew the thing, and she did. Luna told them it was alright, it was just her little dragon messenger. The dragon had a name of course, his name was Oscar. They took him along too. Now they were one big group, but no one knew what was coming up ahead of them.
Chapter 5
As the group kept moving forward the place actually started to look like a woods. There were beautiful buds blooming on the trees. It was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen. Until, all of the sudden buds started opening up and revealing little black mysterious creatures. Everyone jumped back, but Oscar just stood there curiously staring at the little creatures, obviously not knowing what they are. Brian was nervous; if Oscar was a messenger wouldn???t you think he would have seen these things before. Then Oscar said ???These creature appear when something huge is about to happen.??? ???I???ve never seen them, but I???ve certainly heard about them.??? ???I???m quite sure that the huge thing is Brian, the fact that he came, and also the glue.??? The creatures started attacking, Brian wished he had some sort of sword, but he didn???t. Then somehow there was a sword on a belt around his waist. He was about to ask Jordan how it got there but he seemed to know. He fought off the creatures but he heard them say something, so he stopped. They said they had a very important message to Luna and Brian, so the others walked away giving them some privacy. The creature were creatures of good and evil. They said sometimes there was something good and sometimes bad. But this time was different it was both. Brian wondered how that was possible. The creatures said the good thing is that he had come; the bad thing is what he must defeat. The creatures said ???Beware, we are evil when it is an evil thing that is happening, but we are good when it is a good thing that is happening.??? ???Now it is different, we sometimes are nice but we turn evil when you least expect it.??? ???So run along now before we turn evil, and beware for more will come before you.???
Chapter 6
Brian wouldn???t move, he insisted the creatures come with. Luna and Oscar were trying to pull Brian away, but they couldn???t pull hard enough. ???Why must we go???? said the creatures. ???We could kill you.??? ???I don???t care.??? said Brian. ???We might need you.??? So two of the creatures came along, and of course they had names like anything else would. They???re names were Tet, a boy, and Tita, a girl. They weren???t like the other creatures though. Even when something evil was happening, most of the time they were good. Luna and Oscar weren???t sure about them coming along but they decided they should.
thanks for reading what i have so far
