So basically I write poems they're not that good but tell me what you think!

How sweet, your blue eyes shine in the glistening moonlight. Lean in for a kiss maybe two but never three or four. As I hold your hand your head it shakes and I ask you what is wrong, but you are gone. My head spins and my body shakes what was once warm is now a cold ice cream cake. As I lay on the ground the cold freezes me. I cry on the floor thinking of love and war. You appear in front of me. I look at you with blood red tears burning my up eyes. You look at me with promising eyes and tell me, "It'll be alright." Although I wont see you for a long time I know your close by.