song im down in a hole and i dont know if i can ascape (gutar playing) but i knew that someday you will have enough power to lift me up when im down so far down (echo) so far down down down im down in a hole and i dont know if i can ascape this dreadfull place ohhh nooo ohhhhhhh nooooooo yea yea yea yea oh noooo so far so far so far down i dont know i realy dont know what i did to end up so far down i know i got to keep going trying yea yea yea ohhhh nooooo im gone .......................... poem friends friends arwe like colors they never fade away friends are like the sun they will make your day brighter they will never let you down they will allways be there for you through the bad and the good friends are friends no matter what. thanks plz rate my song and or poem thanks for your ratings
for the song 5or6/10 keep working at it, its a good start you need a chorus to the song and verses. for the poem, its good 8/10. just work on spelling. good job : ]
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