a pathway, a sheltered view. they sit. together but not touching and they both understand. the drapes that fall from the trees hide them, and alone but together they know. one final path to be taken, one walk to be took, the pathway awaits their entrance. with love in their hearts and tears in their eyes, they rise. strength gained from strength, a hand within a hand they step forward. one pathway, one walk, one future, two people, one soul. but wait, there is more the drapes now are rising the wind is blowing the storm is coming the rain is coming the earth is moving. they stand and wait, watching, listening, humming and the drapes close. the final curtain. but they are not alone, never alone, they'll always be together.
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this poem has been copyrighted to myself so please, as i always ask, do not copy and paste onto any other blogs - many thanks - johnny x
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i like it....very romantic
114 years, 8 months & 12 days ago 23rd Oct 2011 08:07
It's great c:
the wind is blowing the storm is coming the rain is coming the earth is moving. ~ Here, I would change 'the rain is coming' to 'the rain is falling' so it's less repetitive(: But it's just a suggestion, and either way, it's an awesome poem. x
114 years, 9 months & 7 days ago 27th Sep 2011 17:48
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