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her pig tail which soon morphed into a gold bow with a
lightning arrow and shot it at Essence missing by a few
inches the arrow hit the tomb door and pulled Celestial in.
Celestial woke up in a pitch black room with nothing there
she tried to have her eyes adjust but they just wouldn't.??
Her long blond hair now covered with dirt made it look
gross. "Hello!!" she called "Someone help me!" Just then a
dark figure moved around in the shadows with a arrow in her
heart came to her. "Why... My daughter Celestial however
did you get in here?"?? "mo...mom?!" Celestials eyes widen
then she collapsed and passed out once again. Days went by
and Celestial woke up next to a warm fire and a young man
cooking some bacon "Hiya! Want some bacon? My names Derek
whats yours? I found you passed out and you looked cold."
Derek smiled as he asked.??"Celes....Celestial" she answered
tiredly "Cute name.." He told her. They ate dinner and
Celestial told him everything about her twin sister Essence
and how she wanted to enslave mankind he listened carefully
then agreed to help her but that changed when the tomb was
open and there was nothing there.?? It had happened Emiliee
was alive again to avenge her death all across Jamestown.
Kristen12344
Thanks I know im still working on it I was reading R.L. Stine then I got the idea for this book ^-^ yeah i know i need to fix it but i'll edit it when i get a chance
114 years, 6 months & 11 days ago 22nd Dec 2011 11:52
The use of imagry in the beginning is poor:thus, your plot line is jumbled and hard to understand. The switch in between the chapters need a better flow because it is hard to change from past to present tence, i know trust me, but other than those mistakes I personally thought the book was supurb and enjoyable to read. Thank you
114 years, 6 months & 11 days ago 22nd Dec 2011 11:47