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iluvollie
I swore I was going to end it tonight
But here you are putting up a fight.
I ran to my room and slammed the door
Locked it tight then hit the floor.

I tried to make sliver shine meet my wrists
I tried but I couldnt, `cause all you did was insist
That there is more to my horrible life
You said it`ll get better, just put down the knife.

I sat and thought about what you said
Then I felt something running down my wrists, and it was red.
I heard you banging on the door
But I was still huddled on the floor..

I unlocked the door and moved away
You came in and it was as clear as day
You saw the blood, you saw the knife
You saw your friend end her life.

You picked her up
and layed her on her bed,
All the thoughts rising,
Running through your head.
iluvollie0
iluvollie14 Feb 20088comments
Comments (8)
  • RockydaDog 0 RockydaDogSCARY
  • iluvollie 0 iluvollieIts not scary,its real life.
  • VetGirl199494 0 VetGirl199494Did you write that? it's amazingly truthful about life nowadays. SO many people think about suicide and so many go through with it.
  • iluvollie 0 iluvollieIts just some of my work,i write poetry all the time,And most of it is really emotional.
  • VetGirl199494 0 VetGirl199494It's really good.
  • iluvollie 0 iluvollieThank you!
  • Xusha2 41 Xusha2It's good (:
  • posypinky 0 posypinkywow... that is really good
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