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MY AND MY FRIENDS STORY!
15 years, 3 months & 26 days ago
9th Feb 2009 15:16

NO STEALING ANY CHARACTERS, IDEAS, OR ANYTHING ELSE PLEASE!!
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Emmy is my character and the boy at her school(Demetri) is my friend's character. Robin is Emmy's little 3-year-old brother and her mom is pregnant with a girl.
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1st Chapter
Emmy



(Whatever month & date), 2009: Ugg???I finally just got settled in our new house and guess what! We had to move again! So anyways???we are now in ******, **(a town in a state) and I like this house better that the last one???especially since I get my own room! The window faces the gorgeous hills. But Robin will share a room with the new baby once she???s born.

I just came back from school and it was really interesting. The classes are rather hard but the teachers are nice. But the students aren???t. The ???popular??? girls are really mean. I should have seen that coming. There was one dude that didn???t say anything. He???s quiet but at least not mean. And my God! His hair! It was like all black and long but the ends were like pure white. I really want to know where he got that done! Well???I have to go to the store to get some food for dinner for Mom. Then I have homework to do. So bye!

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I walked down the street thinking about the town that my family just moved to. Brushing my hair out of my face, I sighed and looked at the ground. I stopped as there was a little red stone on the ground. I bent down, picked it up and noticed that it was glowing. ???Huh. That???s odd.??? I whispered to myself softly. I straightened up and studied the little stone. I wonder if it is a gemstone. After a while, I placed it in my pocket and continued on to the store. I looked at the bright sun and then at the hills. Shivering at the wind, I hurried to the store.

As the doors to the store slid open, I grabbed a store advertisement and leafed through the pages. A bright ad caught my eye: ???Get 20% off of a camera!??? I grinned and tore the section out. Running over to the produce section, I saw some of the girls from the school drinking some coffee. Slowly, I walked up, ???Hi. I???m Emmy.??? One of the girls giggled and another looked at me as if disgusted, ???Umm???hi???? The girls face cleared, ???Oh ya! You???re that???new girl. Well???uh???we have to go. Bye.??? They turned and walked out of the store leaving me standing there with a tear on my cheek. Why do people hate me so much? I quickly wiped the tear away and walked to the produce section.

I looked at the list my mom had supplied me with and picked up some tomatoes. I slipped them into the basket and grabbed some basil. I looked for the electronic isle and saw some Valentine heart candies for sale. Quickly calculating in my head, I found that I had enough extra money to buy three of them. There would be one for Robin, one for me, and one for???a future friend. I looked for the nicest ones and placed them in the basket next to the bag of noodles. Remembering that my task was to find the camera section and be home before 5:00, I hurried off. I looked on my watch for the time and realized that I would have to leave very soon for mom to start dinner. I ran from isle to isle looking for the electronics until I found them. Glancing through the colors I grabbed a black one then changed my mind as I switched it for a green one.

Exiting the store, I opened my new camera and took a picture of the now setting sun and the pink clouds around it. I carefully placed it in my jacket???s pocket and zipped it up so that it wouldn???t fall out. Glancing at the road, I hurried for home.

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Chapter 2.

Demetri


School again. I hated school. I never belonged there and I never would. I wasn't like anybody else there, all because of my family line. Although today was much different then most days. There was a girl, a new girl came to town and joined the school. She wouldn't stop staring at me. I didn't know why I even tried being normal. She saw right through me, she knew there was something wrong with me just like everybody else did.

???Hey ugly whats up???? Some kids said as they smacked the back of my head and laughed loudly as they walked passed me. I glared at them. Part of me wanted to go over there and rip their heads off. The other part knew that doing that would just prove to the world that I really was crazy. I grumbled to myself as the aluminum cafeteria table I sat at remained empty like always. I pulled out a large sketch book out from my back pack and began to work on my drawing of a tree. One tree,a green healthy tree in the midst of a dead forest of evergreens. From behind me I noticed kids laughing and pointing at me. They all thought of me as 'the weird kid whit black and white hair'. Or 'the kid who draws pictures that don't make any sense. Or even. 'the kid who dresses strange'. I was just about sick of staying here with a bunch of dumb kids who judged much to harshly. I tried to ignore them and go back to putting shadows on the tree in the picture.


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Please tell me what you think! ???

I'd try editing the grammar/spelling. ^.^

Other than that, it's pretty good.
115 years, 3 months & 6 days ago 1st Mar 2009 17:44
 
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